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Review: The Vanishing Girl

Author: Laura Thalassa
Date of Publication: January 27, 2015
Pages: 338
Source: Netgalley - Thank you!

Every night after Ember Pierce falls asleep, she disappears. She can teleport anywhere in the world—London, Paris, her crush’s bedroom—wherever her dreams lead her. Ten minutes is all she gets, and once time’s up, she returns to her bed. It's a secret she’s successfully kept for the last five years. But now someone knows.

A week after her eighteenth birthday, when frustratingly handsome Caden Hawthorne captures her, delivers her to the government, and then disappears before her eyes, Ember realizes two things: One, she is not alone. And two, people like her—teleporters—are being used as weapons.

Dragged off to a remote facility where others like her live, Ember’s forced to pair up with her former captor, Caden, to learn how to survive inside until she can escape. Only Caden’s making escape seem less and less appealing.

But even as Ember falls for the boy who got her into this mess, she knows that she is running out of time. Because the government has plans for those like her, and those plans might just cost Ember her life.


Review:
This one's a book I’m surprised to say that I hadn't heard much about. I’m surprised because it has a gorgeous cover, an experienced author and a fantastic synopsis. The best part, however, was the story itself. I thoroughly enjoyed this fast-paced action-thriller.

The Vanishing Girl is a story of teleporters. People who, with the help of genetic manipulation, have the unique ability to teleport to a random or government controlled destination for the first 10 minutes of falling asleep. Our heroine, Ember, is one of these unique few who have managed to remain out of the reach of the government. However that issue is amended soon enough.

The whole set up of how the teleporters and the Generation Project came to be was fascinating. The idea of male and female pairs was interesting; it sure did leave room for some awesome sexual tension. The project itself and the training, schooling and missions were another fascinating aspect. I do think, however that more time could’ve been spent on the development of skills via training and more missions as at some points Ember’s sudden display of skill was jarring since it seemed to have sprouted from nowhere, despite the DNA explanation.

After being captured and taken to the teleporters' facility, Ember is introduced to her pair, Caden, Blonde, beautiful and deadly, Caden is the perfect soldier; the project's best. Their interactions were kind of weak in the beginning, now that I look back, but Caden was quite likeable and they quickly grew to understand and like each other. For ever loyal soldier's bone in Caden’s body, there is a similar curious and suspicious one in Ember. Together they could find out anything, which gives me hope for the next book especially after that devastatingly evil ending. 

I would categorize this books as new adult, because there are sexual relationships and a focus on the scientific side of teleporter reproduction. I actually really enjoyed this aspect. In no way was the story centred about the characters' sexual relationships. Instead, sex was recognized as a very human thing and used to further the relationships but besides that it never really overshadowed the plot.

There were definitely holes as there often are in such books but like watching the next Taken movie, you take some things with a grain of salt and just sit back and enjoy. This book was like watching an action movie unfurl in my head. It was fast, it was kickass and scared me to death at some point but at its core it was very enjoyable. I look forward to the sequel.

-MARI

Review: How It Went Down

Author: Kekla Magoon
Date of Publication: October 21 2014
Pages: 336
Source: NetGalley- Thank you!

When sixteen-year-old Tariq Johnson dies from two gunshot wounds, his community is thrown into an uproar. Tariq was black. The shooter, Jack Franklin, is white.

In the aftermath of Tariq's death, everyone has something to say, but no two accounts of the events line up. Day by day, new twists further obscure the truth.


Tariq's friends, family, and community struggle to make sense of the tragedy, and to cope with the hole left behind when a life is cut short. In their own words, they grapple for a way to say with certainty: This is how it went down.

Review:

How It Went Down goes where a lot of YA doesn't and just for that it deserves to be applauded. The story centres around a certain premise that is far too common in real life: a black kid is shot by a white man. What happened? Magoon effectively uses multiple POVs to offer a broad look at the impact such a tragedy can have on the community.

The writing was insightful and very thoughtful. There were many different voices and happily, they all stood out. Different characters warranted different writing styles and each perspective was about two pages, never surpassing a handful. You would think that a story like this would be a mess, confused by so many voices, but Magoon did a commendable job at focusing the story. There was one connecting theme to every passage: Tariq.

After having read How It Went Down, I feel like I know Tariq, and yet I don't. He seemed to be a firecracker of a kid, full of charisma and self assurance. He wanted more for himself and his friends. He loved his sister and came from a good family. He also had a side to him that almost invited trouble. A lot of characters used the term "punk" to describe him and it stuck with me. Most importantly about Tariq is that he is not all good or bad, but by no means did he ever deserve to die.

How It Went Down made me think even more about what's always going on in the news. I like to think of myself as someone that does try to listen and see the world as it is and even so, I was shocked and sad to read How It Went Down. The story is full of different people with different lives and how Tariq's death impacts them all. It also speaks a lot to racial intolerance and how hard it is to get justice for a black boy's death. There were elements like family issues, gang life, abusive relationships, and even people who believe that racism is over while it's still a dangerous world for people of colour.

I can't tell you if How It Went Down is accurate, but it feels that way to me. I'm lucky to never have lived in an environment like Tariq, and so I knew that this stuff existed: gangs, violence, drugs, but I never quite understood how. For kids like Tariq, the odds are against them. I've dealt with some struggles in terms of getting to university, but for kids that live in those sorts of neighbourhoods, it's exponentially harder. It's not even the studying aspect: these kids are not safe. The world doesn't care about them, and the people that say they care will use and abuse them. They get stuck in a cycle, and it's not their fault.

When people advocate for diversity in YA, How It Went Down is what happens, and I am so grateful that books like this exist because they need to. You don't understand the life you're living until you're confronted with another one. I can read articles about Ferguson, I can read so many statements and tweets and cry about them, but putting all those pieces together is How It Went Down, and it does that superbly. It sets the scene, and frankly, it's a story that needs to be read.

Now, in terms of more style related comments, How It Went Down is extremely engrossing, especially at the beginning. Near the end it does drag a little and the ending is extremely open. Nothing is really solved, and I feel like this is a book best read in bits and pieces rather than in massive chunks, like I did to finish it. The ending has its strengths and weaknesses, and I think I'll end up saying that it's very consistent with the rest of the book. It was pretty obvious what Magoon was trying to do and she did it extremely well, based on my rather ignorant opinion.

My biggest hope for How It Went Down is that this story can start a discussion, or at least open some eyes to some of the issues that still exist in our society, no matter how much we try to ignore them. In any case, I'm very thankful to Henry Holt for allowing me to review this title.



-P.E.




Review: Queen of Someday

Author: Sherry D. Ficklin
Date of Publication: October 7, 2014
Pages: 262
Source: Net Galley - Thank you!

ONE GIRL WILL BRING AN EMPIRE TO ITS KNEES...

Before she can become the greatest empress in history, fifteen-year-old Sophie will have to survive her social-climbing mother’s quest to put her on the throne of Russia—at any cost.

Imperial Court holds dangers like nothing Sophie has ever faced before. In the heart of St. Petersburg, surviving means navigating the political, romantic, and religious demands of the bitter Empress Elizabeth and her handsome, but sadistic nephew, Peter. Determined to save her impoverished family—and herself—Sophie vows to do whatever is necessary to thrive in her new surroundings. But an attempt on her life and an unexpected attraction threatens to derail her plans.

Alone in a new and dangerous world, learning who to trust and who to charm may mean the difference between becoming queen and being sent home in shame to marry her lecherous uncle. With traitors and murderers lurking around every corner, her very life hangs in the balance. Betrothed to one man but falling in love with another, Sophie will need to decide how much she’s willing to sacrifice in order to become the empress she is destined to be.

In a battle for the soul of a nation, will love or destiny reign supreme?
Review:

I'm in the minority with this one, and at this point I've accepted that. So I'm here to share why no matter how hard I tried I just couldn't appreciate this book. The problem, I feel is rooted quite deeply into this novel, to the point that almost every aspect had a flaw for me.

P.E. isn't a historical person and so her loving this was what introduced me to this novel. I mean great historical plus Russian royalty? Yes please. I envisioned great world building, character development, proper court etiquette, and a fantastically gripping plot... What I got was none of those. This book is a light romance (if you want to call 1 girl x 3 guys insta-love a romance). Little to no time is spent one bringing the surroundings to life and the plot consists of holes and conveniences.

Sophie was very inconsistent for me. She would boast about being so strong as her father taught her how to wield the sword and hunt but she talks a lot. The rest of the time she tells us how she is ready to sacrifice herself for her family (marrying a king is very undesirable apparently) and how she has no desire for love, then she has insta-love relationships with two other men and reciting Shakespearean and Hellenic love poetry. But once she sees the trouble in the path of her "one love" she quickly hides in her shell but is never decisive on what she wants to do. She wants to be queen but they she wants to be in love and now she doesn't want to be queen.. Boo hoo.

Going into this one, I knew that it wasn't correct in its history so I completely excused that and looked past it. A thing that I will never pass by is historical etiquette. 17th century Russia has a culture of its own very different from today or even 17th century England. I don't mind if Sophie's story is fictionalized but at least try to make sure the world is correct. They kept talking of Shakespeare and Helen and Paris of Troy. The latter I guess would have been translated to Russian or Germain by then but Shakespeare was way to new to have been accepted into different languages. Even if it had been, I found the constant bombardment of fake, one dimensional love proclamations through quotes from Shakespeare and the story of Troy very annoying.

I'm not a big fan of Shakespeare but I've read my fair share and this novel to me is a little bit of a Romeo and Juliet remake. We have a naive girl and a lusting fickle guy and they fall in love after two sightings but of course their relationship is impossible and so they lust away.

As for the other characters, I didn't like any. It was honestly hard to do so as we don't learn anything about them. The book is set around Sophie and her romantic interests. The interests have a shallow backstory and we know their titles but Alexander has no personality besides being devoutly in love while Sergei is dark, loyal and nobel. I guess I kind of like Sergei but I always like the dark, loyal and nobel, he just had no character development for me to appreciate him enough. Something that really bothered me about characters is that I notices some of them were there for one purpose. Example, Sophie's mother. She was plain mean. Hence Sophie hated her. End of story.

I've been going through a lot of Goodreads reviews on this one and many compared it to the CW show The Reign. I haven't watched that show but what I have gathered from it and the reviews is that the show has many differences from actual history and is more about love and teenage relationships than real history. Similarly, Queen of Someday takes a very key historical figure Catherine the Great of Russia and ignores everything else while making a light romance. I can imagine that it is enjoyable for those who appreciate such stories. I always love some romance but I need substance and this one didn't have that for me.

Love Poetry Galore


"Where both deliberate, the love is slight. Who ever loved, that loves not at first sight?" -Alexander

"The last think i remember is wishing that if I were about to die, that I could do it back in Alexander's arms." - Sophie

"I bite my lips against the suffering, for fear I will call out, and for fear of who I will out for." - Sophie

"If I ever find out who did this, I sweat to you, I will kill them with my own hands." -Alexander 
...
"Please don't do anything rash. My time at court would be too dark to bear without your presence."-Sophie

"Her lips suck forth my soul, see where it flies. Come, Helen, come, give me my soul again. Here I will dwell, for heaven is in these lips."-Alexander

-MARI


DNF Review: Before You

Author: Amber Hart
Date of Publication: July 29, 2014
Pages: 320
Source: NetGalley - Thank you!

Some say love is deadly. Some say love is beautiful. I say it is both.

Faith Watters spent her junior year traveling the world, studying in exquisite places, before returning to Oviedo High School. From the outside her life is picture-perfect. Captain of the dance team. Popular. Happy. Too bad it’s all a lie.

It will haunt me. It will claim me. It will shatter me. And I don't care.

Eighteen-year-old Diego Alvarez hates his new life in the States, but staying in Cuba is not an option. Covered in tattoos and scars, Diego doesn't stand a chance of fitting in. Nor does he want to. His only concern is staying hidden from his past—a past, which if it were to surface, would cost him everything. Including his life.

At Oviedo High School, it seems that Faith Watters and Diego Alvarez do not belong together. But fate is as tricky as it is lovely. Freedom with no restraint is what they long for. What they get is something different entirely.

Love—it will ruin you and save you, both.


Review:


As a huge fan of Simone Elkeles’ Perfect Chemistry, I’m always on the lookout for the next best thing. When I saw Before You, I needed to have it. The synopsis was so intriguing and I loved the mysterious pasts and bi-racial relationships. Too bad the excitement waned after the first few pages.

I may have psyched myself out of this one, because there is nothing I can say except I was disappointed. My problem wasn’t with the writing, Ms. Hart is obviously talented, it was with the story, the plot and the characters.

The story is the classical West Side Story, Romeo and Juliet, forbidden romance. It’s formulaic but when done right, enjoyable. That wasn’t the case with Before You. The story was lacklustre and obviously formulaic. There were so many plot conveniences that it made the story unrealistic and unrelatable. 

There was also a stark resemblance to Perfect Chemistry. They both start with the beginning of senior year and the protagonists are getting dressed for their first day. Faith, like Britanny, is dance captain with a friend who is hellbent on taking her spot. Faith is also queen of her school and is dating the star quarterback and a class -A jerk. But, they are perfect for each other and have been together forever! The similarities were a little too much and they bugged me.

As for the characters, I read up to halfway and I honestly couldn't appreciate them. Faith was unrelatable and frankly, a little pretentious. Her constant comments on her restricted life and messed up past didn't help me connect with her, they just made me see her as ungrateful. 

Diego on the other hand, was also a very flat character. He had a bad past with the cartel and was now in America building a new life. From what I read, Diego moved to America for his safety but he didn’t act like someone who wanted to be there. Also his constant comments about the white girls he labeled as sluts were uncalled for. I don’t think all guys think like that and I don’t much like those that do.

Many the side characters like Faith's friend Melissa, her boyfriend Jason, and his mother were completely one dimensional. All Melissa wanted to do was break Faith's relationship with Jason because Faith was "restricting" herself. Jason was the perfect boyfriend until he conveniently turned into an ass after seeing Diego. His sweet Housewives of Orange County mother soon turned into a snake as well. I just could not find one character to help redeem this story, especially when things started going downhill thanks to the instalove.

Overall, this book wasn’t for me. I couldn’t get into it. There were so many things that bugged me upfront and it’s a shame because when done well these types of books are my favourites. Not this time.

-MARI

#Friday Reads: Before You & Let's Get Lost

I know this is a popular twitter meme but I thought I would move it over to the blog and give it a go every now and then when I'm reading an interesting book.



Both books are for review so I can't wait to start making a dent though I will be quite busy all weekend.

I've been reading Before You for a week now and I'm not too sure about it. There are many things that have been catching my attention in a not too good way.

I recently received Let's Get Lost and it looks amazing. I love road trips and the first chapter was quite good!

What Are You Reading This Friday?

-MARI

Novella Review: Worth the Effort - Ella's Story


Author: Kai Strand
Date of Publication: May 6, 2014
Pages: 78
Source: Author for review - Thank you!

Ella Jones is a coward. There is a teen boy living in the alley behind her work and she is terrified of him.

Desperate to leave behind the stereotypical and judgmental world she was raised in, Ella forces herself to make a true connection with seventeen-year-old Ayden Worth. As their friendship grows Ayden’s quiet, gentle ways teach her true courage. 

But there’s more to Ayden’s story than Ella knows. When their worlds collide in the most unexpected place, Ella feels betrayed. Will she find the courage to learn who Ayden really is, or will she determine he’s not worth the effort?


Review:
Worth the Effort is a unique story. It tackles the tough topic of homelessness, something I’ve only ever come upon in one other novel. The topic is quite obviously a taboo subject and people become uncomfortable when discussing it but when has avoiding something helped solve the problem? Strand managed to give us a quick view of the life on the streets in this 78 page story and it made the novella for me.

Ella is a sweet, down to earth narrator when she comes across Ayden, a homeless boy taking refuge in the ally behind the coffee shop she works at. Reacting as anyone would, her heart rate quickens and she fumbles with her keys as anxiety takes over and makes the easy task much harder. What if he attacks her, she is alone defenceless. But all Ayden does is give her key back.

The novella made me think so much. We always manage to find ways to distinguish ourselves from others, sometimes were smarter, prettier or richer and that apparently makes us better. The homeless are seen as less than human sometimes because why else would we be terrified to face them. Just because they don’t have a home shouldn't mean that they are bent on hurting those that do. 

As always topics of homelessness arise because of hardships that push people on to the street. Kai Strand managed to explore all these details and at the same time build a relationship around Ella and Ayden. They both grow as they get to know each other and this fascinated me. Ella was already a round character with a lot of background and personality. As she got to know Ayden and started to question societies judgements on homelessness she grew as a character and became so much more.

My only issue arose with the romance angle which I felt was a little unrealistic and rushed but I realize that this was a novella of only 78 pages and so, many things couldn't be dragged out for as long as I wished they would be.

Still, for it’s length this story was a great joy to read. I learned things and was able to appreciate two very likeable characters as well as a well written story. I think that this story has the makings of a book but I’m happy with what I got in the novella.

-MARI

Review: How I Got Skinny, Famous, and Fell Madly In Love

Author: Ken Baker
Date of Publication: April 22 2014
Pages: 272
Source: For review

"Thick. Heavy. Big boned. Plump. Full figured. Chunky. Womanly. Large. Curvy. Plus-size. Hefty." To sixteen-year-old Emery Jackson, these are all just euphemisms for the big "F" word—"fat." Living on a Southern California beach with her workout fiend dad, underwear model sister, and former model mother, it is impossible for Emery not to be aware of her weight.

Emery is okay with how things are. That is, until her "momager" signs her up for Fifty Pounds to Freedom, a reality show in which Emery will have to lose fifty pounds in fifty days in order to win the million dollars that will solve her family's financial woes. Emery is skeptical of the process, but when the pounds start to come off and the ratings skyrocket, she finds it hard to resist the adoration of her new figure and the world of fame. Emery knows that things have changed. But is it for the better?

Review:

First off, I think this cover deserves a lot of credit. A full handful of people asked to see the book, so it's obviously a great cover because it attracts peoples' attention.

It seems like I have read almost every book ever about reality tv. It's something I've read some about, so I know a lot of the tropes, and Ken Baker did use some of them. That doesn't mean that How I Got Skinny, Famous, and Fell Madly in Love didn't have some twists.

The main story arc of Skinny is Emery dealing with her weight. Emery is obese and she has always lived that way. Her relationship with food is complex, and her relationships with her family, including her dad, the motivational speaker and ex-NBA player, her mom, a former actress, and her skinny, model sister Angel, were all damaging. Emery had a lot to deal with but her life wasn't all that bad. She still had Ben, who was sweet and supportive and always awesome.

What I had to do in order to enjoy Skinny was accept that I did disagree with Emery on some things. I didn't like her attitude, which was rude and condescending. Emery always acted like she was the smartest person in the room. She was also extremely self righteous. Emery honestly believed that she was in the right for thinking, for example, that shaving hair is a freedom (as a proponent of long hair, and someone that does like my hair, no thanks). In fact, I couldn't relate to Emery sometimes because I don't have the same relationship with food that she has (I actually like healthy food!), and frankly weight loss isn't an issue for me. Do I like Emery as a person now? I don't know. I believe she is flawed, but who isn't?

I think that, although I didn't connect with Emery as much as I could have, Emery's characterization was strong. By the end of the book I was sympathetic to Emery and her plight. Emery was informed and snarky, and I feel like if we met we would either hate each other or adore each other because a lot of the things I don't like about Emery's personality are traits in myself I try to control. Emery was an active citizen and person, and her take was always fascinating.

The writing succeeded in capturing my attention. There were many pop culture references, but somehow Ken Baker made it seem natural. I loved seeing Emery's schedules and lists. Changing the writing style once in a while never hurts. It's extremely clear that Ken Baker knows a lot about the reality TV business and the pressures that come with maintaining that ideal body.

For the rest of the book, my review depends on how I look at the story. If I'm considering this book as more of an exploration of a theme than a story, then I say mission accomplished. Emery was truly obese and had multiple issues. She remarked a lot about how words like "fat" were hurtful, and I think that just being in her head was insightful.

On the other hand, the storytelling was very weak. The plot took a while to get going, and then it promptly stopped. The ending was a little bit of a cop-out because it felt like Ken Baker knew his message was communicated, so he shut the story down. Up to that point, there had been slow characterization for the secondary characters and I was curious to see how everyone would reconcile their issues. They didn't. In some ways, I don't mind because you rarely see this in a book, a story ending with so many open plots just ignored, and I think the shock factor is pretty good.

On the other hand, I can see how if you were really invested in Emery, this kind of ending could piss you off because it's not final at all. In fact, this could be the ending of a chapter. The reader doesn't know if Emery will be okay, or if Emery actually makes lasting progress with her family, or anything. There's a little hopeful burst and the story ends.

A lot of the story and plot is underdeveloped, and that's probably because this book is about the idea of living with obesity, and what kind of impact weight actually makes on freedom.  Now, that being said, I think I liked it. It's refreshing to read a short, yet entertaining book with a very ambiguous ending. I feel like the rest of the book could be clichéd if Baker had continued, but he stopped for some reason and the story is over.  And, somehow that works.

Books are weird. This one is between 2 and 3 stars, because the story was underdeveloped but also entertaining. Hard decision, but I'll stay consistent and go for 2.


-P.E.


Review: Steel Lily

Author: Megan Curd
Date of Publication: August 12 2013
Pages: 315
Source: Review copy- thank you!

AVERY PIKE is a commodity. No, more than a commodity. Her existence is guarded at all costs.

She’s a water Elementalist, the strongest of her dwindling kind. She creates steam to provide energy to fuel Dome Four: the only thing standing between humanity and an earth ravaged by World War III. No steam, no Dome. No Dome, no life.

Or so she thinks.

That is, until a mysterious man offers her a way out of having to donate steam. A way to escape the corrupt government of Dome Four. While the offer seems too good to be true, Avery is intrigued. But when she arrives to her new home, she realizes the grass isn’t any less dead on this side of the fence. Instead, the lies are just hidden better.

…Which means digging deeper.

When Avery enlists the help of her friends to uncover the truth, she learns that while some secrets are better left concealed, humankind was never meant to live in a cage. And when you can control the most sought after resource, you can learn to control anything…including the fate of your world.


Review:

Steel Lily is a book I've been meaning to read for a while, and after finally having finished it, I enjoyed it.

The world is really cool. People live in these giant domes because World War 3 destroyed the rest of the Earth and Avery's dome is the last one in existence. Within the domes lies a poverty filled world completely reliant on people like Avery- Elementalists. Instead of using electricity, steam is used and because Avery can make steam by manipulating the elements, she's the governments' most valuable tool.

Although there remain a few questions about the world and Avery's actions, I was pleased that the author realized these questions existed and even addressed them. Early on, Avery makes some very selfish choices and I was happy to see she was called out on them. I would have liked to have spent more time on this though- things Avery should be guilty for, the choices she did or didnt make, instead of feeling bad for other people's sacrifices for her.

This kind of contributed to me not really being into Avery. I didn't hate her, but she never really won me over either. I think she'll get there. The characters in general were all cool but missing that little extra bit. Alice was a great BFF and I want to see her get a chance to shine too. Her character has a charismatic personality but needs some time to become an active player, not just a liability. I liked Jaxon too, even if he was overly quippy at times. Avery is a good influence on him and I'd like to see his character grow. Their romance didn't bother me because it took time. Avery wasn't going to rush things, and Jaxon was willing to prove himself to her.

There are villains and heroes, and although it's a little too clear which is which at this point (ahem, after you finish the book) I want to know more about both sides. If there are two sides in a war, I like to see blurred lines. Some characters did blur the lines and I liked it. There were a few big twists too that blindsided me.

My main critique of Steel Lily is that I would like the story to slow down. So much is being introduced and it's exciting, but as a reader I need time to digest it. This book was nonstop action to the point where I felt a little overwhelmed as a reader because there was such an onslaught of stuff happening. A few scenes based on character development and just learning about the world would have helped a lot. This is however a very personal issue so take it with a grain of salt.

I was never bored. That's a highlight. I managed to read Steel Lily very quickly and the ending was definitely exciting.


-P.E.


Review: Ghost Hand

Author: Ripley Patton
Date of Publication: January 8 2013
Pages: 368 
Source: For Review- Thank you!

Seventeen-year-old Olivia Black has a rare birth defect known as Psyche Sans Soma, or PSS. Instead of a right hand made of flesh and blood, she was born with a hand made of ethereal energy.

How does Olivia handle being the girl with the ghost hand? Well, she's a little bit morbid and a whole lot snarky. 

Her mother thinks her obsession with death, black clothing, and the local cemetery is a bid for attention. But when Marcus, the new guy in Olivia's calculus class, stares at her like she's a freak, Olivia doesn't like it. And when her hand goes rogue, doing things she never imagined possible, Olivia finds herself running for her life with Marcus from a group of men bent on taking the power of her hand for their own nefarious purposes.


Review:

It started with a bang. Ghost Hand has a take no prisoners approach to plot, which basically means that the action is nonstop. This results in an extremely readable and entertaining read. It doesn't come without a cost.

The story begins with Olivia in class. She has this condition called Psyche Sans Soma where her hand isn't a real hand, it's more of a spirit thing. In Olivia's world, this is a rare but known condition. As Olivia is writing a test, something happens and her hand pretty much goes insane. It reaches out and grabs something out of the girl in front of her. Thus begins  a very crazy turn of events.

To enjoy this book, there were a few things I had to accept. First, there wasn't going to be much character depth.

You know those scenes that are all about characters' feelings and reactions to events? Scenes that aren't that necessary to the plot but make the characters more real? Frankly, there was not enough scenes that featured characterization. This left me very distanced from the characters. I had a first impression of each and it didn't go beyond that.

In general, a lack of detail was one issue I noticed. Some characters acted in ways I truly didn't understand. The parameters of the world went unexplained and I'm still fairly in the dark about the world set up. If there are anti PSS groups, wouldn't there be pro PSS groups? Some of the magical and ghostly stuff also didn't make sense to me.

The plot was great but the way I see it, this story was fascinating yet needs some more colouring in the lines. I'd like to be able to understand the characters and their relationships more. Olivia and her mother have an extremely strained relationship that I was curious about. I want to know more about PSS and people's reactions to it. Tell me more about Emma.

Considering the length of the book, I would have welcomed more. However, I tend to enjoy detail in writing. For people looking for pure entertainment, Ghost Hand is more than adequate.

One aspect to the story I enjoyed a lot was some parts of dialogue. I noticed it right away because the dialogue felt  natural. I've recently read and complained about the way swearing is used in YA and Ghost Hand pretty much did it perfectly. Olivia was spunky and not afraid to drop an f bomb here and there, in the right situation of course. Her narration was funny and a plausible voice for a teen, and the foul language totally helped that.

In general, a book I liked. It didn't call to me. I would have liked more character depth and connections, as well as some more explanations considering the premise and world building, but I enjoyed the plot and the story never failed to entertain. 3 hearts.


Review: The Silent Deal

Author: Levi Stack
Date of Publication: May 2 2013
Pages: 358
Source: Review copy- thank you!

When Viktor and Romulus, two peasant boys, dig too deep into their town’s strange past, they awaken the wrath of a mysterious overlord. As the blood brothers struggle to survive, their search for answers takes them through gambling parlors, bare-knuckle boxing matches, and dark forests full of wild animals and men alike. But even with the help of their friends, can they escape the deathly experiments their foe is creating in Staryi Castle?

Enter the bold lands of the Russian Empire where the colorful characters of The Card Game dwell, from the fortune-tellers and fire-jugglers of the Romani Gypsies, to the dangerous criminals that make up the Thieves World, the predecessor of the Russian Mafia.

Review:

My thoughts on The Silent Dear ate quite muddled. I read the first few chapters before agreeing to review it and I liked the writing. It was clear and concise; basically, there was nothing wrong with it. It drew me in and the scenes were well described.

What I didn't like had more to do with the story. This story is well developed. It's not a simple story and I was surprised and shocked when the author wanted me to be. It's easy to get caught up in the fun and adventure. I would argue that this book isn't 100% YA. It's about a younger set, and it features a lot of adventure and is wildly imaginative. I could see marketing it as MG or younger YA. The problem is in the characters. They're decent, but nothing distinguishes them at all.

I think this is probably one of the better examples of "plot based story" that I've ever read, because there isn't much character development or focus. There is a story that is happening, and the characters are important because they tell the story. In terms of sympathizing with them or caring about them, I didn't. I feel like I don't know them. They're the boys who did this and that, not the boys who are this and that. Not being able to connect with the characters is a big issue because if your plot isn't progressing well, your readers have nothing to look forward to.

The basis of The Silent Deal is that Viktor and Romulus, a mysterious boy from the woods, strike up a friendship in Aryk, a small, strange town in Russia where nothing is as it seems. Aryk has a secret, one that no one speaks about. Playing cards are forbidden and the town is isolated. Viktor and Romulus both have their reasons for trying to uncover the truth, and the stakes are higher than they imagined.

I was drawn in because this book featured male protagonists, and seemed to be completely different from typical YA. There is lots of action and the story is a big story because it attempts to incorporate many things like gypsies and Napolean.

When I started The Silent Deal, I couldn't get into it. There was nothing to set the characters apart and I struggled as the story began itself. It takes a while to get the story rolling, but once it gets rolling it's a good story. There are chases and deceptions and a compelling mystery. My only issues stem from some of the execution.

I already said the characters were an issue. The Silent Deal could have been so much stronger if I could connect emotionally with Viktor, or anybody. One thing I thought was really cool about Viktor is that he's the other guy. He's not the mysterious orphan dude. He's that guy's best friend. Harry's Ron Weasley, so to speak. He doesn't know everything and he's the guy that chooses to get into the mess and befriend the strange, wild child. Viktor couldn't completely trust Romulus and there was potential for Viktor to be a fascinating character in his own right, but he wasn't.

I also didn't enjoy how sometimes, the story was almost too big and elaborate. I didn't understand what the parameters of the world were; was there magic or no magic? Was it science? Alchemy? It's hard not to spoil, but there are otherworldly elements and mentions that are not explained at all, for example the Fairy Ring or Romulus's upbringing. They're just sort of there and they end up playing an important role in the plot. I definitely think the world could have been set up better because the confusion over what is possible and not possible was strange.

There's almost too many questions. There's no denying that The Silent Deal is an adventure. It starts out slow but picks up. I'm not sure if it's the story for me, because I couldn't connect with the characters and the setting didn't entirely fit in my mind. I did like the plot and the adventure. I think this is probably younger YA material, or MG, because just thinking of my friends, they wouldn't be interested. Although I liked the second half considerably more than the first, this book is overall a book I feel neutral about. 2 hearts,


-P.E.


Review: The Anatomy of a Single Girl

Author: Daria Snadowsky
Date of Publication: January 8, 2013
Pages: 227
Source: Received from the Author for review
With Judy Blume-like honesty and insight, this sequel to Anatomy of a Boyfriend is about life after first love--romance, sex, friendship, family, and the ups and downs of life as a single girl.

After everything that happened—my first boyfriend, my first time, my first breakup—jumping back into the dating game seemed like the least healthy thing I could do. It’s not that I didn’t want to fall in love again, since that’s about the best feeling ever. But as a busy college premed still raw from heartbreak, which is the worst feeling ever, I figured I’d lie low for a while. Of course, as soon as I stopped looking for someone, an impossibly amazing—and devastatingly cute—guy came along, and I learned that having a new boyfriend is the quickest way to recover from losing your old one.

The moment we got together, all my preconceptions about romance and sex were turned upside down. I discovered physical and emotional firsts I never knew existed. I learned to let go of my past by living in the present. It was thrilling. It was hot. It was just what the doctor ordered.

But I couldn’t avoid my future forever.

In Daria Snadowsky’s daring follow-up to Anatomy of a Boyfriend, eighteen-year-old Dominique explores the relationship between love and lust, and the friendships that see us through.


Review: 

The Anatomy of a Single Girl is the story of  Dominique. She is fresh off her first year of pre-med, first boyfriend and first heartbreak. Now on vacation, all she wants is some down time with her best friend Amy and to shadow a doctor for her internship at the hospital. However, things don't always turn out the way one plans and Dom's summer of quiet turns quickly into one of firsts and lasts, highs and lows all leading to one important revelation.

If I was asked to describe The Anatomy of a Single Girl in one word I would say honest. Anyone who has read it will agree with me. Snadowsky did not refrain from being frank with her readers. Her frankness really set the tone for her writing and helped make the read more realistic. Almost every aspect of the book from the setting to the dialogue and more helped build the realism until I felt like I was reading someone's memoir or watching someone's life unfold in front of me.

Snadowsky's writing was very nice and clear. It sounded like an 18 year old girl speaking and not an adult. The dialogue was fun and quirky with the exception of some parts that I had to note. One in particular that I noticed was between the protagonist and a male friend. They decide on doing something together and so they exclaim "Yeah, let's do it!" Immediately after, they burst into giggles. Ugh no! Thankfully that is the only comment of its variety that I found in the novel so things turned up from that point!

I found Dom relatable. She was just a girl trying to find her place in the world; make friends and find love. She was really smart, as a pre-med should be, and I enjoyed her little medical or just random nerdy facts here and there. It made the read more unique in my opinion.

As for the other characters, I didn't learn much about them, which is one of the cons of the story. I found Dom's parents were always absent and didn't really get to have a dominant role in the story. Same goes for her friends, or lack there of.  Amy, who is basically her only friend, was not my type of person. I found her to be quite mean. The things she said were always put downs in disguise and then she would up and fly away for the next few chapters then pop back in.

Overall, despite some hitches here and there, I really enjoyed the book. It started out slow but picked up quickly and I was wondering what would happen next. I found some great lessons being taught as well which is always nice. It's just a very nice, fun story of a girl and a very wild summer. I recommend it to any one who wished to delve into a funny and drama packed read. Keep in mind though that this is new adult therefore sex and mild language is present.

-MARI

Review: Sketchy


Author: Olivia Samms
Date of Publication: April 30th 2013
Publisher: Amazon Childrens Publishing
Pages: 238
Source: Review Copy- Thank you!

A popular cheerleader—raped, beaten, and left for dead. An edgy outsider with a gift. Can they team up to catch a killer? 

Bea’s life has been a mess ever since she got kicked out of private school and sent to rehab. Now clean, Bea is starting over at Packard High School, in a city shaken from two assaults on young women. The latest victim, Willa Pressman—the one who survived—doesn’t remember a thing. But Bea has a disturbing new “skill”: she can see—and then draw—images from other people’s minds. And when she looks at Willa, Bea is shocked by what she sketches. Bea might be the only one who knows Willa’s secrets—and who can take down the killer before he strikes again.
Review:
I finished Sketchy and I feel a little sad that I read the ending in such a crappy mood. However, it does say something that when I wasn't very pleased I thought this book would be able to help. It did because Sketchy is entertaining with a really cool main character.

Bea has personality and she has some very identifiable traits. She's sarcastic and energetic, but also persistently caring. She feels like she needs to do something to help the poor murdered and assaulted girls and so she puts herself out there and tries to do so, even if she could get hurt in the process. She's so impulsive and has this adorable enthusiasm for her hobby, clothes, which I can relate to. Everyone gushes about something, right? There's also a bit of background demonstrating that all is not good in Bea's life. She's a recovering drug addict and one of the most fascinating aspects of Sketchy was seeing how different people, mainly her understandably overprotective parents deal with that. It's interesting seeing the trust be rebuilt and it was interesting to explore Bea's dynamic with her mom.

The plot was also pretty interesting and fast. There was a mystery and it was solved by the end. There was one issue I had with the story that affected everything else, and for me that was the writing. I loved the personality and voice in the writing. It felt like Bea was talking to me as I read, so that part was well done. Believe it or not, I would have liked more description. Scenes felt a little too abrupt and the transition from setting to setting wasn't very smooth. It's not like it'll ruin your reading experience, but I would read a paragraph and the next paragraph would kind of zoom forward and it would make me wonder how Bea got from A to B. If you enjoy action, this is great, and I do so I still liked the book. It was just a little jarring at times for me. Maybe I'm just not used to this writing style? Nonetheless, I would have liked more description and thought to balance out the dialogue.

Now let's talk about something really awesome about Sketchy: the design! It's genuinely well made and pretty with even my friend commenting on how they like the cover. What I adored were the journal entries, the texts, and the sketches. Little visual details in a book always excite me because that means someone cared about doing that little bit of extra and it's beneficial to the reader. For once, texts felt like real texts and I could see Bea's mental image too which made her all the more real to me. It seems like such small features but I do enjoy them.

Overall, I think Sketchy is a nice way to start the series. Definitely entertaining and easy to read so I liked it. It wasn't without its issues and I'm sure with more experience for the author and maybe practice for me, the writing will feel more comfortable. I also hope to see some more depth in the sequel, particularly when it comes to Chris. He's a great BFF but I wonder if there's more to him. Either way, my curiosity is definitely piqued and I am looking forward to reading more of the Bea Catcher chronicles. 3 hearts,


-P.E.